All in all I think the book is great. But there are some things I want to get rid of. 1) Did Dracula seriously release a wolf from the zoo and then use it as a battering ram to get into Lucy's room? What the hell? XD 2) I think it's nice that Van Helsing and Co. are so concerned about Mina's mental health, but it doesn't make sense not to tell her at the time. She already knew everything because she brought together the diaries and other notes. If Dracula could read Mina's mind I would have understood but before that? Absolutely incomprehensible. Especially because Mina is not a lady who is easily hysterical. 3) When Renfield so bitterly begs Dr. Seward and his friends to let him go the night they decide to enter Dracula's house, he surely already knew that his "master and lord" would come that night. He also knew for sure that he would fall for his seduction and ask him in. That's why he was so emotional when the men didn't let him go. He also knows the next day that he did something stupid because he seems rather apathetic and is very worried about his soul. When Dracula came on the third day he knew he was going to die anyway because his "master" would never turn him into a vampire. So he probably decided to die a hero and wanted to stop Dracula from visiting Mina in her bedchamber. 4) Dr Seward and Van Helsing have seen all the drama with Lucy but don't see Mina changing at first. Only when it is almost too late and Dracula has given her a blood baptism. 5) Quincey's death is totally unnecessary at the end of the book. What was the purpose? So that it doesn't mean that everyone survived unscathed or just so that Jonathan's and Mina's son has the nickname Quincey and happens to have his birthday on the anniversary of the American's death? 6) Am I the only one who read Johnathan's notes that Seward and Godalming are married? Twogether? XD But I still think the book is great. For everyone who thinks the book isn't gay enough for them didn't understand the subliminal allusions. I personally ship the whole group on a friendly level and I really like the interpersonal moments between the lines. P.S. If that's not the best English, I'm sorry. I wrote most of this using Google Translater.